Tailar System V2

This is a system which I have worked on for approximately 6 months, albeit inconsistently. I likely have about a week's worth of work in here, and I have put a lot of effort into it, so I would appreciate an honest rating. The Tailar System is a trinary system, being home to 3 stars as well as 21 planets, 17 moons, 1 submoon, and 6 dwarf planets. It is also home to one civilization, the Kalijau (ka-lee-how). Native to Kaious, they have spread throughout the Tailar System. There are two other planets with naturally occuring surface-level ecosystems: TU-IV Shayeli, a temperate, habitable planet with warm and shallow oceans, as well as lush, humid jungles teeming with life. No civilization has been able to develop due to the harsh and competitive nature of its ecosystems, resembling those of ancient Earth during the Cretaceous period. Due to its distance, the Kalijau have had rather poor chances of studying it, with brief flybys providing most of their information. TK-IV Ubiro, a nearly frozen planet, having only sparse seas and lakes of liquid water around its equator which hosts struggling ecosystems of small, hardy plants as well as some small rodent-sized animals. Most life on this planet thrives around hydrothermal vents in oceans deep beneath the icy crust. Due to its close proximity to Kaious & its habitability and research potential, it has been thoroughly inhabited by the Kalijau, and been subjected to intensive study. Other objects of interest include: TK-I Clorantia, who's gravity has formed a small, tight asteroid belt in the inner Taulisk System TN-IV Kaious, home of the Kalijau. It has three large moons, all of which have been colonized. The moon Boncan is of most interest, having been partially terraformed by the Kalijau, as well as hosting ancient fossils from before the climate changed and killed off all remaining life. Suvela, the most massive planet in the system. It orbits the stellar barycenter, and it hosts a very large system of moons, with the a