Eco Friendly (Charlie, Medium Difficulty, 4 levels)

Charlie, the dedicated manager to the Miami Super Aquarium, has just learned that the rundowned place he's loved since childhood is being co-opted and torn down by the Russian Mob. So, now the mob is going to learn that you don't get between a man with an unhealthy obsession and his "friends". This is my first campaign ever so any feedback would be appreciated. I should note that I'm aware of the lack of punctuation in most of the sentences. This is due to me having issues with the key configuration on my keyboard and being unable to use things like periods and question marks. I tried to structure the dialogue in a way to get around this but I understand if it's a problem for some. Regardless, any other constructive criticism would be great! Hope you enjoy!